it seems like this was made in a hurry. so IMO these are the negative things [1] unnecessary background music. would be better if people who are involved in the scene do some dialogue to initiate the act, do fake sounds indicating that they enjoy and may be dirty talking during the scene. [2] week finishers in most of the scenes. what should have been is that g after the guy ejaculate, the female should have sucked the dick , kiss it , lick it etc. i.e. do all kind of oral stuff for about 1 min before moving out.
due to the above , cannot in honest mind give a 3.0 or above.